I have just read your story and I just got some problems that I think that is crazy and can change.
Number one why did you go inside a stranger's house straight away? Number two did you remember what Grumpy said to you about letting strangers in the house? Number three why did you eat an apple from a stranger. This bit is about what I like about your wonderful story.
1. I like how you said to the 7 dwarfs you will do cooking and cleaning.You were always kind to everybody. Also one last thing before I go did you know the kiss you had did you like or did you didn't like it?
Write back soon.
From Fifita
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